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1 Editor // Apr 3, 2008 at 4:59 pm
This is a great story. I think it would be more affective if it were written in first person point of view. The showing versus telling aspect is very well done in the beginning of the story. I would like to see more of this throughout. Here’s a flash fiction prompt to help with that.
Keep writing,
The Editor
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